2016 Freelance Writing Workshop: notes from the professionals

The final person on my list of freelance writing advisers is Larry Clow. Like me, he got his start writing for a local newspaper and is moving on this spring to pursue freelance writing for real. He has worked as a reporter and newspaper editor and has a memoir in the works. I emailed him about his thoughts on writing and editing. Here is what he sent me.

Larry Clow, author, editor of The Sound, freelance writer

What kind of stories does The Sound look for?

The Sound is always looking for Seacoast related stories — that’s the first question I ask writers, in fact: What’s the Seacoast connection.

Generally, our focus is on arts and cultural events, and a lot of our stories preview upcoming events — shows, film screenings, author readings, plays, etc. But we also print news and feature stories, too, and so I’m also always looking out for topical news-y features about things happening in the region, or maybe national topics that could have a local angle.
Does it accept stories from writers just starting out? If so, how do you like to be approached in that case?

We do accept stories from writers who are just starting out! I like new writers to send a brief pitch describing their plan for the story and some potential sources, and I also like to see one or two writing samples, so I can get a sense of the writer’s abilities. Email is always the best way to send pitches to us; since we’re a small staff, there’s not always someone in the office.

What are you looking for in new writers?

I’m looking for writers who know whatever topic it is that they want to cover, or, at the very least, know who they need to talk to so that they can know about their topic. Not everyone is an expert about whatever they want to write about, but I at least need to see that a writer’s willing to do the necessary research for a good story.

And, of course, I look for reliability and consistency — meeting deadlines, responding to emails, turning in relatively clean copy, that sort of thing.

What are some ways writers can show they are serious (have ideas for art, name possible sources when approaching you, etc)?

Emailing me with a decently fleshed out pitch, with some possible sources and details about art/photo opportunities is HUGE. That alone automatically sets a writer apart.

Another big factor: If the writer demonstrates in some way that they’ve read The Sound and are familiar with the types of stories we publish. One writer recently pitched me a story that was (A) about an event he was organizing — already a big no — and (B) was taking place on the other side of New Hampshire — another clue that he hadn’t seen that we only write about events in the Seacoast. Conversely, another writer recently sent me an email with 4 short pitches; each pitch included a brief description of the story, why it was locally relevant, why it was timely, a handful of possible local sources, and, in two of them, a reason why this writer was the best person to write the story. Needless to say, I immediately accepted one of the pitches (it was for this story: http://soundnh.com/taking-root/)

What are some of your writer pet peeves (turning in stories late, spelling errors, etc)?

My number one pet peeve is emails that I call “non-pitch pitches.” Basically, emails/messages/phone calls from writers who don’t have a specific pitch, but are just contacting me because they’re interested in writing. This drives me a little crazy, and it’s something that, when I was first starting out as a writer, I thought was a totally jerky thing that editors would say. “Why wouldn’t editors want extra help?!” I thought. Now, I see why — it’s extra work for me to come up with story ideas for writers I don’t know, when it’d be far easier for me to simply assign stories to writers I know who can do them. I appreciate the intention, but it drives me nutty.

As a writer, do you do any freelance work? If so, what kind?

I do! Right now, all my freelance work is for the University of New Hampshire, where I write features for The College Letter, a monthly publication from the College of Liberal Arts, and the UNH Magazine. I’m hoping to expand that soon — I’d like to start pitching stories to some larger regional and national publications.

How have you been able to build relationships with editors to get published?

I have, and it’s largely been through personal networks. My UNH jobs came by way of a professor I worked with in the English department while working on my MFA. For three years or so, I did regular work writing policy stories for Child and Family Services of NH’s quarterly newsletter, and I came to that job after meeting their communications coordinator at an open house event.

I stay in touch with my two UNH editors regularly, either pitching them stories or checking in to see if they might have a story that needs to be picked up. (That’s another good reason to know the publication and it’s schedule — for example, if my editor at the magazine passes on a feature pitch, I know that she still assigns some short, 600-or-so-word alumni profiles for each issue.)

Do you ever submit pitches to editors you don’t know and if so, how did that work?

I do, though not as much as I’d like. I’ve pitched a couple times to Dispatch, an arts/lifestyle magazine in Portland, Maine and was successful, but I haven’t had much time to pitch them lately.

My most ambitious pitch was a feature for Yankee Magazine. In that case, I wrote my pitch and got some feedback on it from a friend who’d recently sold a story to Yankee (she also tipped me off about which editor reads the pitches, so I made sure to send my pitch to that person and not the general editorial email account). The editor passed, unfortunately. I’ve got another idea I’m working on a pitch for, though, so maybe this one will be successful.

 

2016 Freelance Writing Workshop:more notes from the professionals

I like to interview a few freelance writers and editors each year for my workshop to give me a more comprehensive view of what’s happening in the freelance universe. I’d come to know Erik through a mutual friend and his excellent Instagram account. He is an editor for ZEST Magazine out of Portland, Maine and has ample freelance writing experience. I emailed him a few questions about his roles on either side of the editor’s desk. Here are his answers.

Erik Neilson, editor ZEST Magazine, freelance writer

What advice would you give to freelance writers trying to break into a new publication?

Take as much time as you can to internalize the publication through and through. Read back copies, pay attention to what they’re doing on the web etc. This is the only way to be sure that the pitches you structure will be a good fit; otherwise, you’re throwing darts blindly and hoping something sticks.

How much success have you had pitching editors you don’t know personally?

It’s always harder at first, but once you actually get in the door with a piece, you have the opportunity to establish that personal relationship with an editor and maintain it over time. Persistence is a big part of the initial push, as is having a portfolio that will make the person do a double-take on you.

How much of your publication is written by freelancers?

ZEST is entirely freelance; we don’t employ any staff writers.

What are editor’s looking for at your publication?

Our editorial calendar is pretty far out; we’re working on September/October now. We always ask that writers keep this in mind when pitching and also look at the sub-sections that tend to be static throughout each issue. As our niche is fairly specific (Maine Food and Drink) but also open, we’ll hear any pitches that fit the format.

How much does a story pay at Zest?

For seasoned writers, $0.50/word.

2016 Freelance Writing Workshop: notes from the professionals

I like to interview a few freelance writers and editors each year for my workshop to give me a more comprehensive view of what’s happening in the freelance universe. I met Nick at my storytelling event, Long Story Short, where he told a fantastic story of a woman he met working in an Alzheimer’s unit. Hearing that he had done some freelancing, I shot him a few questions. Here are his answers.

Nicholas Conley, author of novel Pale Highway and has written for Vox and Alzheimers.net

You have published a novel and written some freelance writing pieces. Did the novel come first or the articles?

I’m a novelist, first and foremost, though my first writing publications were actually short stories, which allowed me to get a better idea of how the publishing process works. Writing articles really began when I was first getting ready for the publication of Pale Highway, a novel which deals with Alzheimer’s disease. Because this is a subject that I have real life experience with, I felt a strong desire to write articles relating to the subject of Alzheimer’s care in order to spread more awareness about what it’s really like. After having success getting these pieces published, my article writing work branched out into a general interest in writing about topics that I feel are important and worth discussing, with an emphasis on healthcare.

Once you had written the novel, do you feel it was easier to get the interest of editors?

Absolutely. Having a list of publications to my name allows editors to look me up, see what I’ve published, and have a pretty good idea of what I’m about. In addition, it demonstrates a proven track record.

How important is it to have a niche, would you say? For instance, you write about alzhiemer’s disease and can show you have first hand experience with patients. How important is that to an editor would you say?

It definitely helps, especially when starting out. Editors want to know not just what the article is about, but why you are the person who should write it. In addition, when getting future pieces published, it helps to have demonstrable evidence of your expertise in a given subject, as you can include clips of prior articles with your query.

Do you write pieces first and then shop them around? Or do you pitch ideas to editors and write based on their feedback?

I do both, depending on the length and complexity of the piece. I personally prefer to write pieces first, because then I know exactly what I’m working with, but I often do pitches as well. If one is pitching, think the biggest priority to keep in mind is having a strong idea from the outset about exactly what one is going to write about, how one is going to write it, and a general idea of how long it will be.

How successful have you been in regards to pitching stories? I would say I have a 75% success rate with editors I know and a 0% success rate from those I do not. How about you?

Great question! It really varies depending on the subject. My success rate has gone way up in this last year since the publication of Pale Highway, and since my articles appeared on Vox, Alzheimers.net, and so on. However, back when I was just pitching short stories, I had a long list of hundreds of rejections. It’s really all about perseverance; pretty much every other writer I’ve met has more rejection stories than I can count, and it’s those rejections that will act as the building blocks of your future success.

NOTE: My most amusing rejection to date was back when I was 18, when I accidentally pitched a story to one magazine’s submissions address… while in the query letter itself pitching it to a different magazine. The editor made a point of mentioning that he was pretty sure I’d submitted to the wrong publication — but that “even so, this story is not what we’re looking for.” Quite embarrassing!

Freelance writing workshop 2016

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It was another successful year at the Nackey Loeb School of Communications for me. On April 9, I was joined by 21 writers looking to break into freelance writing. I tried not to be too much of a downer when I told them how hard it is. Hopefully they walked away with something helpful that will get them to the next step.

Below is my PowerPoint presentation. I told them I only use PowerPoint once a year for this class, so please bear with with cheesy swipes and bad layout.

I’d also like to thank Rick Broussard from New Hampshire Magazine and Nancy West from InDepthNH who sat on my panel of editors and gave great advice. Of course thanks always goes out to Dave Tirrell-Wysocki, one of the best newsmen I know, who helped facilitate the whole thing.

Freelance Writing Workshop2016

 

A Story to Tell

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I don’t know why I decided to sign up for A Winter’s Tale storytelling series a few years ago. I was out of work and trying desperately to get published anywhere. I guess I thought forcing myself on stage, to come up with words that create a fluid flow of thought, well, I hoped it might just make me a better writer.

It’s been a while since I’ve taken the stage to tell a story about myself. More recently I’ve been trying to master the personal essay, which I’ve found is very different than telling a group of people something funny or awkward or horrible about yourself. Storytelling is something I’ve always wanted to dive back into, but wasn’t really sure about the best way to do it. When I attended the 3S Artspace opening in March and saw the facilities, I knew this would be a great spot for such a storytelling event.

I brought it up to Executive Director Chris Greiner when I bumped into him late night out for drinks. He said the idea was great and that I was in charge of making it happen.

It looks like it’s happening, folks.

Long Story Short is a non-fiction storytelling series featuring writers, performers and regular folk from across Northern New England. Held every other month, on the third Wednesday of the month, each Long Story Short event puts six storytellers on the stage at 3S Artspace to share their tales of a strange, sad or significant moment from their lives.

We’re still looking for speakers for the November and January events. Email blh@gardnerstate.com if you are interested in speaking or at the very least spreading the word.

And also a special shout-out to the amazing artist and designer who put this poster together, Amy Jane Larkin.

First ever March Pitch-a-Thon

Is there anything worse than a blind pitch? Whether you’re writing one or getting one, pitches can be a painful process. To new writers, the successful pitch formula is an enigma never to be mastered. To editors, poorly written pitch letters litter their inbox like grocery store plastic bags. After five years of on-again-off-again freelancing, I still have trouble creating a pitch editors will bite on, at least when it comes to the blind pitch.

Each April, I teach a half-day freelance writing workshop at the Nackey S. Loeb School of Communications in Manchester. A big segment of the seminar is spent on pitching. My advice is to get to know some editors first and find out what kind of stories they are looking for. Do they want you to submit a completed story first, or do they want a short pitch to consider first? How long are their pieces? Will taking a few photos improve your chances of landing a story? What parts of the publication are easiest to break into? Etc…

Eventually I get to the blind pitch – a.k.a. pitching an editor whom you’ve never met or spoken with before, typically at a larger, national publication. Really that’s what everyone is there to hear, getting their byline in Real Simple or Field and Stream. It may be my lack of confidence in front of a crowd, but when I explain to them that the best I’ve ever been able to get out of blind pitch are a few emails back from an associate editor, followed by silence, I can see disappointment flash across their faces.

Next month, I am slated to teach my Freelance Writing Workshop again, this time for a full day. For this extended seminar, I’d like to come armed with new and useful information, and if what they’re really want are tips on blind pitches, I figured I better get some together.

Hence my self-imposed first ever March Pitch-a-Thon. For the month of March I will focus at least one day a week and all additional down time to pitching as many publications as possible. The emphasis will be on publications where I don’t know the editor and where I’ve never pitched before – blind pitches. I’ll provide updates here, as well as some samples of my writing and pitches, as a resource for my future seminar students. It’s also one of those public shaming, deadline-driven initiatives to ensure I actually get things done.

Here’s my to-do list as I open my first ever Pitch-a-Thon:

  1. Make a list of stories you can rewrite or re-purpose for a national publication.
  2. Conduct additional research or editing to get these pieces ready for submission.
  3. Write those pitches.
  4. Find the right editor to send my pieces and get those pitches out the door.
  5. Come up with a list of stories I’m going to research and write from scratch, and a list of possible publications to send them.
  6. Gather sources, photos and other important information editors would want to see with my pitch.
  7. Write and submit the pitches.

While I tackle #1-4 this week, I threw this little Eat Pray Love-style pep talk to watch (at the top of the page).

 

Summer projects

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Sometimes a story evolves between assignment and deadline. That was the case with this piece, written for UNH Manchester’s Campus News. I originally highlighted the long-running small mammal research project headed by Professor Steve Pugh and the unique experience it provided students over the summer, but after first review the story became something bigger.

Beyond the Books and into the Field for Summer Animal Tracking

Each day, Joshua Linnane walks a portion of an 800-acre plot of undeveloped land on the outskirts of Manchester. The senior biology major at the University of New Hampshire at Manchester eyes the ground and trees for hair, scat and rub marks on trees. He’s looking for signs of wild mammals in this urban forest.

Linnane has three motion detection cameras set up in the woods, located in the area known as Hackett Hill. He leaves each camera for up to two weeks to eliminate his human scent from the area and later retrieves the card to see what animals crossed its path.

Linanne is one of UNH Manchester’s Summer Undergraduate Research Fellowship grant recipients. Linnane is conducting a 10-week study and after will compare his findings to data collected 12 years ago by then-student Christine Andrews, UNH professional tutor and lab instructor.

“I’ve found coyotes, raccoon, something that looked like a bobcat, porcupines, opossums, chipmunks and a couple of non-mammal species, like turkeys, blue herons and turkey vultures,” said Linnane. On one of his morning walks, Linnane said he wandered upon a moose and her calf. “It’s really only five minutes out of the city and the diversity in this area is huge.”

To read more, go to UNH Manchester Campus News.

Best News All Day, Prison Edition

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One of the stories I followed closely in the past year is the state’s decision to investigate opening a private prison in New Hampshire. More than a year ago, the state issued a request for proposals from private prison contractors and developers interested in building or renovating a prison that the private company would run for 20 years, then hand back over to the state.

Interest in the proposal was strong.

But now the state has decided to end the discussion, saying none of the proposals outlined how the prisons would comply with a number of court orders, such as how they would provide equal services for men and women prisoners. Not only did the applicants fail to provide enough information on how they would comply, but in some cases they just said they would comply with the court order and left it at that.

Looking back at the coverage last year, it is worth noting the RFP was lauded for being open-ended.

“It’s probably one of the more unique and creative (RFPs) put out for some time,” said Eli Gage, the publisher of Correctional News, a national publication that covers trends in prison construction. “The state has given the ability to leave things (a bidder) is open to do or not do, depending on what they like. Even some in the industry say it’s the best RFP they’ve seen in a while.” (from Union Leader Jan. 2012)

Apparently they thought court orders fell under the open part.

The effort to build a private prison in New Hampshire was meant to save money and probably would have been met with more support if the prison didn’t have to go somewhere. When word got out developers were thinking of building a prison in Manchester (sorry only in print?!), the aldermen tossed it up like a hot potato until it landed in Ward 8, much to the chagrin of Alderman Tom Katsiantonis.

Then activists from Arizona — not a state known for compassion when it comes to prisoners —  spoke across New Hampshire urging Legislators to kill the deal.

But the real reason for killing the deal is likely the changes in the Legislature, Executive Council and Governor’s Office, as foretold by Annmarie Timmins of the Concord Monitor in Dec. 2012.

While residents of Manchester and the other towns targeted for a new prison are likely happy about the decision, the state still has little money to spare, the prisons are still in poor condition and the courts still expect the Department of Corrections to fix its problems. I guess it’s back to the drawing board.

Best News All Day 3-26-13

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Being a superintendent of schools is a pretty thankless job. There is never enough money. Everyone is constantly second-guessing your decisions, from teachers to the school board to the average citizen who knows next to nothing about education. And when you try to make improvements, shake things up for the overall good, parents, kids and teachers fill a large auditorium or gymnasium or hearing room to talk about why the improvement plan is such a bad idea — often before hearing all the details.

Hudson Superintendent of Schools Brian Lane is trying to make a change, to improve student test scores by restructuring the early education model in his town. Will it work? Maybe. But first he has to convince the people who live in Hudson to let him do it.

— In case you missed it, WMUR interview with newly elected Manchester City Democrats Chairwoman Liz Kulig.

— Not quite New Hampshire news, but a rare white coyote was found in Kennebunk, Maine.

These photos of Cranmore Mountain’s annual pond skimming event over the weekend makes you realize the North Country is totally having more fun than we are this winter.

Another blow to charter schools. And the university system.

— The Manchester Superintendent of Schools candidates got a taste of the job Monday night.

— Last Thursday, I attended the Portsmouth Pecha Kucha (pronounced Puh-CHA Koo-CHA), a sort of TED talk thing that actually began before the whole TED talk thing was a thing. My favorite segment was presented by Jane Seney, educator, tour and docent program director. A Manchester native, Seney spoke about how her view of the Frank Lloyd Wright-designed Zimmerman House has changed over the years. It was enlightening and made me realize how rich in art and architecture Manchester really is.

Best News All Day 3-21-13

Portsmouth Naval Shipyard. Portsmouth, New Hampshire, USA

 

A small item in the Conway Daily Sun caught my attention this morning. A new social media policy approved by the County Commissioners warns employees that if they identify themselves as an employee of the county, which most people do on Facebook as part of their basic info, their postings and actions could be considered reflective on the county.

Whoa.

The policy, which got the OK from the county’s HR specialist and an outside attorney, goes on to say, “Supervisors may be held personally responsible for offensive communication or photos that occur on social media sites between co-workers outside the workplace on personal equipment,” if that supervisor is “friends” or follows that co-worker.

While there are plenty of previous cases on the issue of social media and First Amendment rights, holding a supervisor accountable if an underling makes offensive posts? Seems a bit harsh.

Cases on this have been leaning more toward the employer than the employee, as we see in this Huffington Post fluff slideshow. Enjoy.

— Portsmouth Naval Shipyard workers will rally today at noon against federal budget cuts that put their projects at risk. If any of you remember all that these workers did (most of them union) to keep the PNSY open during the last BRAC, you know these men and women don’t fool around.

— On the defense cuts theme, Sen. Kelly Ayotte spoke earlier this week about cutting the “missile to nowhere,” explained below and put in context in this NYT article.

“Senator Kelly Ayotte, Republican of New Hampshire, pleaded to kill what she called a missile to nowhere — a European-based missile defense system that both the Senate and House armed services committees have repeatedly tried to zero out — and to shift the money to military operations and maintenance.

‘There’s not going to be another funding bill for the government until the end of this federal fiscal year,’ she said. ‘This is our only opportunity.'”

— I was in college when they were expanding the east side of Route 101. I remember because I has to drive the road four times a year to get to the Manchester Airport (which it was appropriately called back then). I’ve always wondered why the same courtesy was never extended on the west side of Route 101, seeing as there are many people who travel the road every day and it is a complete traffic nightmare. It looks like the NHDOT is now planning to do so, and spoke in Bedford with residents about what an expansion would look like. Residents are worried the expansion would make Route 101 a barrier from one side of town to the other.

— From the Nashua Telegraph, “Casino bill authors vow to avoid tying expanded gambling to budget battle.” Good luck with that.

— Also from Nashua, the school budget gets a small cut.